Short Script Reflection

I think that my best scene is when the kids go to the park. I feel that it is my best because it describes everything that is going on. And the last scene as well. The children spend their whole day trying to go swimming and when they finally get there, Ernie pees in the pool. I think that this is one of the best scenes because it is funny. My worst scene was when they drink a bunch of water. It was a bad idea but played a role in the story. I think, to improve my script, I could rewrite it a couple of times with some constructive criticism.